i could see the light.
it drove out of the sky and
it took away the dark
and the labyrinth i was stuck in,
and the angels came to me and sang
a song or two and then they
were gone and i could hear
the roars of the demons who were
tearing through the flesh of
another victim and you could hear
his agony – filled screams as he was ripped at the seams, and then
i climbed through the dirt but was okay
as i got a good grip of the earth above, and i looked a
cross the treeline – i could
see the light.
so i chased after it –
this light,
this life,
this chance of existence of no one for no one.
and i chased it and caught it
and i let it devour me whole
as it embellished itself into me.
and then i slept and i woke
in the embrace of the light and i let myself
be engulfed by it once again while the sky wept
and the earth wept and they wept tears for us.
i could still see the light as it
drifted further and further away from me
and the darkness took over so
that i was as lost as before
for ten thousand years and i needed
a sensation of the adrenaline and i searched
and searched and found it and i let
it attack me. the sounds of the demons
as they teared through the flesh of another victim
entered into me and i tried to get up
onto the earth above but i could not
and the flames of hell surrounded me
and took me under and i stayed there
for another ten thousand years
and when I was taking my last breath,
i could faintly,
in the distance,
I could
see
the
light.
This piece was inspired by Joseph Danduran’s I could See Her Halo and is an emulation I started in Creative Writing. The original writing was very influential for me because I found the simple structure of it very strong and impactful. It inspired me the second I read it because it was absolutely beautiful and very elegant.